Has anyone watched the video? To begin with, does anyone have any idea who they are going to be sending this 3.26 minute video to? (I could have done a better job using imovie on my mac).
Listen to the wording. It's kinda strange.
At the beginning of the video they you will hear the audio saying -
"My Beach"
"My Water"
"My Sand"
As if they were the owner / creator / higher power - whatever you want to refer to it as.
Then as the video begins to come to a close, they say
"Someone said God spent a little extra time in our paradise"
Does this seem odd to anyone or just a BAD copywriter?
Listen to the wording. It's kinda strange.
At the beginning of the video they you will hear the audio saying -
"My Beach"
"My Water"
"My Sand"
As if they were the owner / creator / higher power - whatever you want to refer to it as.
Then as the video begins to come to a close, they say
"Someone said God spent a little extra time in our paradise"
Does this seem odd to anyone or just a BAD copywriter?

There is not enough spin and branding and marketing- another pig needing lipstick.

